Tuesday, December 10, 2019

The life at the beach

Talofa bloggers,today I will be talking about life at the beach.So lets get started


Life at the beach
As the sun stalks us above,the fresh breeze blows the smell of salt water into the air.people hop into the salty water,it feels like they are an ice cream waiting to be turned into a person again.As the huge waves swallow up the children they scream with delight,as they safely float back to the sandy,shore to see their parents worried faces.As the anxious children beg their parents to tell them if they are going to get ice cream or not?The child drops their hot dog with tears running down her cheeks and as their parents say no,and as the sneaky seagull swoops up the hot dog. When they fly across the freezing cold ocean they drop the hot dog into the water and watches the hot dog fall through the ocean and sees the startled faces of the fish down below.The parents try to calm the child down by saying we will go home if you don't stop.But instead it made the child  cry even more,as they attempted to make the child stop they tried using candy floss and it work,after the delighted child finished her treat.They watched the cliff drop little pebbles into the water and fall into the seaweeds grasp.

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  2. Kia ora sister,

    I enjoyed the part when the kid dropped his hot dog
    did you think about the punctuation
    next time think about the background please (:

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  4. HI Lita
    my name is Jashaia and i go hay park school if you did not know i am your brothers friend. I love this blog post because it makes me think of going to the beech. Bib you know that when I was at the beech i was with my brother. I decided to pull a prank on him. So i pretend that i was going to drown and then he swam across to save me but then i got up and then i got a hiding.how come you decided to this blog post.

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